main character
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other character
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setting
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problem
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4
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3
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2
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5
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gingerbread man
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3 little pigs
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candy house
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looking for treasure
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Once upon a time, far, far, so far away, there were a gingerbread man and the 3 little pigs. The pigs were taking a walk and they found a gingerbread man looking for his car. He said, “Hey, you pig !”
“Yes?” they replied.
“Can you help me find my car?’
“Ok!” They all tried to look for his car. They looked and looked but they found a candy house. The pigs were hungry so they knocked on the door. There was a old, old pirate. He was living in the house. He had rotten teeth and lots of warts on his nose. “Ahhh!!!” The 3 little pigs and gingerbread screamed!
He said, “If you want food you have to get me some treasure!” so they looked and looked. They got 4 shovels and they went to the beach. They saw two giants at the beach. “Hey, can you help us find some treasure? Hey, by the way can you tell me your names?”
I like your storey cos you have exspland it well and you have good sentins starters
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