walkie talkie Persuasive writing

The blood atory

The butterflies in my tummy are fluttering while I sit in the waiting room.I am in the waiting to get 11 year old injection for Hastings Intermediate. “Wait till she comes out with a big sharp needle,” I say to myself. That can't be sore if my little brother is getting two in his leg he is only 3 months old. The nurse hurries out the door into the waiting room. She calls out my name I start to sweat. I slowly walk to her check up room “Hamish please sit on the big chair” I plod over to the chair and plonk on the seat I have to take my jersey off and roll up my sleeve and get my arm ready to get stabbed. I am getting cold from sitting there too long. I wish the nurse would stop talking and come over here get it over and done with. An hour and a half later she finally came over to talk to my mum she explained what was going to happen. Then she said to me the time has come. Noooooooooo!!!

best part of me

The best part of me! You will describe the best part of you. It is your choice on the style of writing you choose. You may write a poem or a letter or a story. Here are some examples to get you thinking. When we plan our writing we need to think about: 1 Picking a part to write about 2 planning our style 3 describing the part, what it does, the effect it has on other people and why we like it. For example: In a relaxed position, the lips turn slightly down and are revlon, ruby red in colour. When they break into a smile they reveal crooked teeth and lines around the side but I don’t mind. It’s my smile and no one else has one quite like it. It arrives at many different times of the day and is quite infectious. I use it to express myself. Some people say that your eyes always reflect how you are feeling but I think your smile could mirror my feelings My eyes there are two big things on my face and it helps me see it is hazell and shins like glitter and has white on the outside and a black dot in the biddle. It sends messages to my brain so it knows what I see and without my eyes you won't be able to do things. the effects on my you can see new things you can send what's coming ahead like a ball if you had no eyes and you are playing basketball you won't know where the ball is coming from I like my eyes because they are mine and i can control them my safe and I can see new things with them I would never sale my eyes for 1000000000000 dolores.

What's the big idea?

What’s the big idea? WALT summarise Text: ____long walk_______ Author: amandajackson_________ Read the text and record key words/phrases that answer these questions: Who? nanny and the grandson What? the pipes were trapped from the bridge Where? bay plenty When? when nanny was little. Why? she wanted some pipis and mussels. How? from the bridge and pollution. Summarise the text in 25 words (Include key words from the text as well as your words) mussels nanny kaore pipi shakes flax carry further built more more heavy spear kete kaitiaki guardian drop side long across low pauses heavy filled drop water Extra for Experts: Thinking critically and evaluating. Why do you think the author wrote this text? Learn, Create, Share: Create an animation or one minute movie of your 25 word summary. Get it ready to share on your blog.

Production Diary 2014

WALT: record and share our thoughts. Text type: Diary Success Criteria Self assessment Buddy Assessment Teacher Assessment Introduce yourself and your role “Dear Diary...” yes yes yes Honest thoughts and feelings at the time yes yes yes Likes and dislikes yes yes yes Expression / Personality (sounds like you) yes yes yes Date plus optional title for each entry yes yes yes Actions from practice and performance yes yes yes Great examples here: Link Beginning: Dear Diary, let me introduce myself. My name is_Hamish_ and my role in the production is... So far... dancing I don't like my place it’s a bit hard for me to dance the moves you have to go up and down. Wen,Aug 20,2014 Now we just finished our last predation pratos I am a brother and a dancer I know what they do both places FRI,AUG 22,2014 Yass Miss Hill put the lights in the hall Mr Ford tested the light there is green,blue,purple and flashing wight it is like a camera. they are high on the beam and weirs hanging down and plaged in the wall. I bought a ticket it was 6 dollars it is to pay for the lights. THU/AUG/28/2014 Last night on the 27th of AUG we had our first performance when the bell rang for den of school I and my friend Naz were waiting for the colac bay to clear out then we went home. When I got I left my cousins house I started to walk to school miss Roil picked me up from the 4 square. FRI/SEP5/2014 The production is finished the days are back to normal in the daytime we used to watch movies like the incredible moves and the lego movie,shrek 2 in the mornings we do now is writing about 500 world story we have to pick a pitcher I picked polar bears.

cloud lesson

Do wonder how clouds are made? wall an old man ronald he is 60 years old he go’s up on his hutch everyday so he has something to do and his great great grand sun came over papa what can I do you can come up and help me make some cloud ok” we need to get a steam powered energy source. You need to think of a shape like a square the you blow in to it bam!! here it go’s look there is a square then it will float over the world then it will stay up there for 24 hours then it will go away then i will have to make some more it will go all lampy and fluffy like a pillow. Grandson do you like it when you are old like me you can come up here and make some. you can make more shapes and cars and bikes.

cloud lesson

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MATARIKI

MATARIKI

In the start of the day cody hab and totada hab went to the hall we watch the kahurangi dance group they did a haka a poi a wiata they came to talk about Matariki at the end  I and Naz and Adrian did cooking we made flotos in the staff room it was hard for a bit you had to use flour you put the flour on the table the lady how was helping us was keshas mum.

We got a bowl and put the flour and the baking powder in and the salt then she put warm water in the bowl and more flour and we sterd we had to wait and toll in sets when it set she put it on the table it looked like dough we flat in it and cut it up in to quarters she put them into a pan when it was cooking we had to clean up so for the other group when it was cooking the performers came in from the Matariki show. 

Their names are lucky Ray Aroha and two girls when the frayed bread were redder we all came over and had some of the bread. before we made the bread me and Naz did raku it was boring they did not know how to do it me and Naz did we were sitting there then the bell rang for morning tea we were playing handball it was hot on the Matariki day and after lunch me Naz Adrian were in Emars group for Maori fitness.

the short story of the last Herrick secret

The Spooky Forest

I chose this title because the title can catch people’s eye the name sounds a bit spooky you should choose who’s going to read this book. They will know what's going on in this book. Why did Isaiah want to go to town?

Firstly, the book is about a spooky forest . I Am reading the last Herrick secret the people are  Bec's, Isaiah ,Thomas ,Papa, Mama, Oscar, and Mark.   The idea behind this title is that the forest that they live in is spooky.  I thought that when Bec’s nearly stepped in the trap it was frightening and spooky.  

Secondly, they moved to the shack and stayed there for a long time.  I added pictures of the tree house and the gravestones as these were parts of the book that I felt were important.  The gravestones were showing the people that died in the story.

I called it the spooky forest because the book was scary in parts and I wanted the title to show that.  I put the title in the top left corner because it goes with the darkness at the top of the page.  It is bold so it catches the reader’s eye.  I used colour to make it different from the rest of the cover.

Isaiah moved to the city to look at citylife to see how it feels to live somewhere else. The reason Isaiah wanted to move to the town because he wanted to see what it feels like in the town and bec’s wanted he to come back with her city/town.

         

             

How to make my mum angry

                

 My mother is Ali she work’s at wattes factory she makes soup and dessert toppings. She has 4 kids this is all of there name is Steve, Phoenix, Steffeny, and me Hamish

. who make’s my mum angry the most ??      

how to make my mum angry you will have to tap her on the shoulder and shout in her face  HI mum to make her angry and run away from her. And at the dinner table I will talk and eat with my mouth open and that will make her mad.

if your bored don’t say at my mum she will get a bit angry and tell you to go to your friends or go do some jobs. If you leave the door open when the fire’s going she will tell you philately but still have to shut the door.

when you don’t take your shoes off she gets really angry because you can bring the dirt inside so my mum doesn't mop the flow. When me and my sister Phoenix fight my mum gets really angry my brother Steve and I fight it get’s loud and messy.  When Phoenix says dumb things and poking me she starts to go louder. When my brother and my sister fight my mum shouts out “stop all of you”. and we quickly run to our rooms.

To annoy my mother you need to sneak up on her and go into her bag and take her chocolate bar and quickly run away and then she will find out and going looking for me. The most angry thing my mum  doesn't like is on cold night when she puts the fire on and when it goes out. She will come to a cold house and she will put the fire back on. the Question the person who makes my mum mad is me.

main character	other character	setting	problem
4	3	2	5
gingerbread man	3 little pigs	candy  house	looking for treasure

Once upon a time,  far, far, so far away, there were a gingerbread man and the 3 little pigs.  The pigs were  taking a walk and they found a  gingerbread man looking for his car.  He said, “Hey, you pig !”

“Yes?” they replied.

“Can you help me find my car?’  

“Ok!”  They all  tried to look for his car.  They looked and looked but they found a candy house.  The pigs were hungry so they knocked on the door.  There was a old, old pirate.  He was living in the house.  He had rotten teeth and lots of warts on his nose. “Ahhh!!!” The 3 little pigs and gingerbread screamed!

He said,  “If you want food you have to get me some treasure!” so they looked and looked.  They got 4 shovels and they went to the beach.  They saw two giants at the beach.  “Hey, can you help us find some treasure? Hey, by the way can you tell me your names?”

“Ok, my name is Mordecai and this is Rigby. Hey, look there is a map.  Do you know how to read a map?”

“No do you?” said Mordecai.

"No I don’t.”

“ Ok, that's no help! Lets carry on.  Then they ran and ran look. There is an x  means there is treasure.Under the x so they dug and dug and they found the treasure so they ran and ran back to the candy house knock knock!! “hey hey, yes, I got your treasure the pirate came out here is your treasure you can have my house he.The ginger man artsed can you buy me a car he said yes ok what. Can I please have a porsc!”  

space

gta v

gta v

In the weekend we played gta v.   You start off with Michael and Trevor, you do a bank heist at the start.  It is a bit hard at the start .  You break into the volt with  C4 to blow up the lock to get to the money.  Then the cops come, it isn't that hard because you have a machine gun. There's cops behind you. Trevor smashes the window and he shots the cops and they crash into the tree.

The next mission

The jewelry heist

On the heist Michael and Franklin and some people help out. Franklin went on the roof and threw the tear gas. The tear gas knocked the people out.Then Michael charged in and stole as much jewelry as he could.There was Franklin  on a motorbike waiting for Michael. The police at the front told Franklin to move the bike. The cop’s were chasing the.  They were driving in the sewer.   You change into a girl who’s driving the jewelry truck on this part you have to crash in to the cops. Then at the end the jewelry truck stops so the motorbike can go in side.      Escape!          

   

This chief is Tamatea- Pokai-Whenua.  He was one of the first chiefs to arrive in New Zealand in my waka.

Tamatea travelled alone from the mythical land of Hawaiki.   He was a descendant,which means he was from the family line, of Maui.  He is said to be the father of Kahunugunu who was a famous Maori chief known for leading his people with great strength.  He organised the planning of the villages and their food and water.

Tamatea arrived in New Zealand alone and left his canoe in Gisborne.  He travelled overland to Ahuriri which is Napier and then further south to the Ruahines.  This is where he left his son to settle and form the Ngati Kahungunu tribe.

Tamamtea had two wives.  One of those wives is the mother of the great Kahnngunu.  He is known as a famous land traveller in Maori tradition.

1 One the weekend I helped this boy at Maraetotoara foals he was drowning I had to jump and swim to him and push him to the rock .   

2 Last year my teacher Mr Cottrell stayed inside with me in the morning to get better at my reading and my maths he helped me with my art and my school work.

A moment in time

          splash plant 2014           

I  saw peoples anger  crashing into me

I saw  people  going faster and faster

I  heard  people say come back here

I heard  the engine pop louder and louder

I felt  the heat rebounding on to me

I felt  my heart pound harder and harder

I was  feeling sicker and sicker

I wondered  that why I went  on this ride

I just wondered why I wanted two pancakes.                                                                                                                                                                                                                           

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